Hopefully this will work. Just a little poem that I'd like any opinions on please :)
Master of secrets
Master of disguise
Master of speaking nothing but lies
Everything is hidden
Everything is concealed
Everything must never be revealed
A sequence of stories
A tale never ending
Always, always the truth is bending
Master of secrets
Everything is hidden
A sequence of stories
From Dad to Daughter
I like it mate, not 100% on the repeat of always in the fourth stanza - doesn't scan - but apart from that, sure makes a point :-) x
ReplyDeleteah thank you :) yeah I wasn't sure about that so twill be scrapped, thank you very muchly! x
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